Kimishiro
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Bianca
Apr 16, 2006 0:02:20 GMT -5
Post by Kimishiro on Apr 16, 2006 0:02:20 GMT -5
Dedicated to the imaginary girl, who knows not my name.(( Most of my poems come from perspective. So, though the rhyme scheme changes like every other line, it is supposed to relate to the scheme of the man's thoughts. ^^ If that makes sense.. =p ))Everyday, I stared in wonder, Wanting what I could not have.
Seeking something so astounding, Is mayhaps, what drove me mad.
How can you blame me, Can’t you see? That is it you Who tortured me!
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Those voluptuous lips That I adored so much. That light brown skin, I hungered to touch.
I lusted for you Night after night.
Only to incite Those lonely tears, Those oh-so depressing, Lonley tears
That amplified my silent plight, That echoed through my deepest fears, And blindly landed upon deaf ears.
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You haunted my days, Invaded my dreams.
Disturbing my reality, Till nothing was quite what it seemed.
Despite what might Or was meant to be, I could no longer live, Without you with me.
So I developed a plan, Thought it all through.
A plan to capture love, A plan to love you.
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So I slit your throat, And killed you dead.
Then sown your body Into my bed.
And now night after night, You lie with me,
Together forever, For eternity.
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Kimishiro
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Bianca
Apr 16, 2006 0:10:58 GMT -5
Post by Kimishiro on Apr 16, 2006 0:10:58 GMT -5
Double posting..
NO that wasn't sadistic!
Allow me to explain...
This guy was so enthralled, so enveloped by the mind-numbing beauty of this girl, that he lost all sense of reality, all sense of morality and sanity.
He couldn't think of anything BUT her. She devoured his world, and he only lived for her.
In his blinded love-dazed logic, he discovered a way to be with her, forever and for always.
Can you truly blame him for killing her?
I think it came out more-so ramantic than sadastic... and I worked on it for an entire 20min or so.
So gimme a break.
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Bianca
Apr 16, 2006 0:13:59 GMT -5
Post by wtflolrofflewaffle on Apr 16, 2006 0:13:59 GMT -5
nice title..
i think what makes it sadistic is the fact that the death came out of no where...
the mindset changed drastically.
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Kimishiro
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Bianca
Apr 16, 2006 0:21:53 GMT -5
Post by Kimishiro on Apr 16, 2006 0:21:53 GMT -5
Yeah, mayhaps. >=)
I was just dwelling within the darkness of my abode, pondering the most disturbing of irrational thoughts, when the title 'Bianca' just came to me.
As if some unfathomable force projected it to me...
Yeah, I was just bored, lo ciento if I creeped you out.
I'm not really a stalker. Don't have the money for it.
And yar, I like things to come out of nowhere. Then again, it was as if he was appologizing and then blaming her for his own actions.
.:: pokes ::.
Welcome to the forums.
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Bianca
Apr 16, 2006 0:39:47 GMT -5
Post by Tout-Perd on Apr 16, 2006 0:39:47 GMT -5
Don't worry. This is how Kimi welcomes everybody. I got greeted with a mail-bomb. ^_^
I kid! I kid!
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