Toru
Citizen of the Archipelago
GOOD TIMES ARE A COMIN'~
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Post by Toru on Aug 5, 2010 19:26:33 GMT -5
Greetings, folks. The name's Toru. I was kind of interested in joining Exodus when I head everyone's favorite fabulous user, Yoshimitsu talking about it. In other words, I'm from Pokecharms origin x3
I'm fairly decent when it comes to RPing; I hope to start some RPs and join some, too. Very well then, that's me, and I hope you all enjoy my company in Exodus.
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Post by Yoshimitsu on Aug 5, 2010 19:27:52 GMT -5
Hi Toru! <3
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Post by Tangrufa on Aug 5, 2010 19:29:16 GMT -5
Toru has the biggest hair ever. It's like a wilty afro.
Plus nice to see you I spose <3
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Post by ch00beh on Aug 8, 2010 21:31:18 GMT -5
hi
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Post by Loogs on Aug 8, 2010 21:32:53 GMT -5
hay bro hayyyyy
if you don't RP no one will love you. trufax.
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Post by Lady Kara on Aug 8, 2010 22:49:38 GMT -5
@ Steph = ooooooh...so harsh. XD
Welcome to archie exie, Toru! Hope you enjoy this crazy place.
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Toru
Citizen of the Archipelago
GOOD TIMES ARE A COMIN'~
Posts: 10
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Post by Toru on Aug 10, 2010 19:44:44 GMT -5
Thanks very much guys! I'm just putting the finishing touches on my bio, so I'll be posting that up soon (and joining some RPs as soon as possible, 'cause I can presume what Lugiasian said is true xD). And believe me, I will be enjoying this 'crazy' place. 'Cause over at Pokecharms, Wii're crazy and proud of it.
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Post by ch00beh on Aug 10, 2010 20:37:12 GMT -5
woops bad pun i hate you already.
we should just punt you out of here.
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Post by Beelzebibble on Aug 10, 2010 20:44:01 GMT -5
That would be an adequate punishment.
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Post by ch00beh on Aug 10, 2010 20:48:23 GMT -5
Yeah. Expunging this puny punk with great impunity will be the best punishment.
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Post by Yoshimitsu on Aug 10, 2010 20:55:59 GMT -5
oh god toru
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Post by Loogs on Aug 10, 2010 21:56:56 GMT -5
3 years since then, Toru had become a powerful warrior. He traveled continents looking for information about mysterious evilswhat NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO[/b] YOU ALREADY MADE THE BIGGEST MISTAKE YOU CAN EVER MAKE IN ORP jesus christ no do not have one of your character's goals be traveling the world seeking out the great/mysterious/hidden/insert-other-cliche-adjective evil that is such a vague lazy cop-out we do not need another dark age in ORP no no noit might sound like i'm being hard on you but if i don't tell you now i assure you pohatu or choobs will
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Post by Yoshimitsu on Aug 10, 2010 21:58:12 GMT -5
That is totally not the biggest mistake
The biggest mistake is fire control and flight and energy
God Steph
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Post by Beelzebibble on Aug 10, 2010 22:01:30 GMT -5
it might sound like i'm being hard on you but if i don't tell you now i assure you pohatu or choobs will I was gonna jump on the black leather trenchcoat actually but then I read about the geomancy power. Earth gets no love on this board compared to the other classical elements. So I am all for the character.
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Post by Loogs on Aug 10, 2010 22:01:45 GMT -5
That is totally not the biggest mistake The biggest mistake is fire control and flight and energy God Steph ikr and also blue hair what kind of faggot characters have blue hair anyway
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Post by Beelzebibble on Aug 10, 2010 22:02:30 GMT -5
Double faggots.
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Post by Loogs on Aug 10, 2010 22:04:10 GMT -5
it might sound like i'm being hard on you but if i don't tell you now i assure you pohatu or choobs will I was gonna jump on the black leather trenchcoat actually but then I read about the geomancy power. Earth gets no love on this board compared to the other classical elements. So I am all for the character. The earth part is fine with me. I'm just more concerned about the part where this character's motivations are just wandering the earth looking for mysterious evils to fight. That is VAGUE and WRONG and when I did that back in the day my writing was absolute turds and I'm sure it'd be no fun to RP with. I hate hate hate hate vagueness. Sorry :C
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Post by Yoshimitsu on Aug 10, 2010 22:05:19 GMT -5
Guys guys can we chill out a little and let him do his thing because hey he might surprise us all and be fabulous with his RPing?
Or maybe let him learn a bit without forcing stuff down his throat?
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Post by ch00beh on Aug 10, 2010 22:05:38 GMT -5
oh, i was just mocking him behind his back. I wanted to see what he actually did before telling him some friendly pointers such as
"hey, look, this is kind of a cliche origin and the whole black pupils and trenchcoat bother me, but you could do some great stuff with details such as whenever he scratches his head, dirt comes out, and whenever he gets cut, earth and roots start seeping out of the wound. Or instead of that, maybe instead of straight up geomancing, whenever he loses a limb, the earth around him moves up to replace it, and after a visit to his goddess, she reshapes him into Man. Get a little biblical in there.
"Oh and maybe even make the sword not-titanium because titanium is really light and not too good at carving into things.
"Other than that, it's a decent character. Could use work, but all characters could use work. I mean hey, my main character for the longest time had a trenchcoat and sweet shades, but eventually he started getting sloppy with the coat, and the shades became the defining feature of his face and gave him an eye motif, and his do-all psychic powers started playing a tertiary to his personality and big ass gun."
jegus way to jump the shark, loogs.
PS. I reserve the right to mock everyone. It is only fair because it is easy to mock me.
PPS. Ender could geomance. Ender could do everything.
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Post by Loogs on Aug 10, 2010 22:07:12 GMT -5
But we like hazing the newbies, El. It's only because we want what's best for them because we love them and want them to be the best RPers ever. srsly C: C:
I like what Choobs said.
I know I sounded kinda mean, but I really did want to suggest that you clarify your character's goals, because "searching for and getting revenge on this character here which did this unspeakable thing to me" sounds a little better than "walking around and hoping that this great evil drops from the sky right in front of me". It was a friendly pointer rly. :C
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Post by Yoshimitsu on Aug 10, 2010 22:09:16 GMT -5
I didn't think hazing involved insulting their characters.
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Post by ch00beh on Aug 10, 2010 22:09:27 GMT -5
I don't think we ever hazed 90 or biscuit, and look how they turned out.
pretty much the best RPers.
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Post by Beelzebibble on Aug 10, 2010 22:11:38 GMT -5
The thing is they abuse each other a lot.
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Post by Loogs on Aug 10, 2010 22:11:57 GMT -5
Yeah but I got hazed and--oshit nevermind I never said any of this ever
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Post by Tout-Perd on Aug 10, 2010 22:12:58 GMT -5
I personally actually think there's quite a bit of drive in the backstory, and the "Born of a Goddess" angle could totally bring them into quite a few RPs. (Where is this temple located, BTW? I might be able to work you into something, Toru.)
I like the appearance, the limitations, pretty much everything about the character. I'd certainly be glad to have you aboard for some of my RPs.
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Post by ch00beh on Aug 10, 2010 22:14:28 GMT -5
I think that means it's up to El to abuse Toru and us to give him friendly pointers. You have to have history or something.
Abuse pairings: Elliot <-> his kids Biscuit <-> 90 ch00bs <-> potato Everyone -> Lee
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