Post by Soulkeeper Julia on Jul 29, 2009 23:07:35 GMT -5
Meh, this is just a crap-poem I wrote while I was riding in a car... Didn't edit it or anything; just wrote it and that was that.
I wrote it while thinking of a guy I knew in the third grade. This guy, he moved to Alaska the summer after. :[ And I miss him a lot, all of a sudden.
Anyway. That's just the explanation of it, I guess.
I'm prepared for bad reviews. I know it's not a very well-written piece of poetry. ;3
So, here we go:
Something was there, and I didn't know it.
How could I have known? I was only nine or ten.
Back then, I didn't know about love
And now, I can't find any decent men.
I felt a spark, a warm and fuzzy feeling
From deep inside my heart.
Now, I think I know what it meant
And I miss you more with each day that we're apart.
Maybe, just maybe, you felt it too.
I hope you still remember me, just as I remember you.
Do you have a woman now?
If so, does she treat you right?
Do you secretly wish I that I was there instead?
These are the questions I ask myself at night.
When you moved away from here
I was devastated, and I almost felt like crying.
We'd only known each other for a year, and yet
Now, when I think of you, I find myself sighing.
Your eyes, your smile, your adorable voice...
I would have you again, if given the choice.
You must've been my sanctuary;
You kept me safe from harm
And comforted me whenever you could
And I guess that seeing you leave caused quite an alarm.
I think I may have really loved you
But fate had wanted to see you off.
When I think about your image in my mind these days
I see your face glowing in a light so soft.
Tyler, where are you under this sky?
Nowadays, I find it difficult to keep my spirits high...
I wrote it while thinking of a guy I knew in the third grade. This guy, he moved to Alaska the summer after. :[ And I miss him a lot, all of a sudden.
Anyway. That's just the explanation of it, I guess.
I'm prepared for bad reviews. I know it's not a very well-written piece of poetry. ;3
So, here we go:
Something was there, and I didn't know it.
How could I have known? I was only nine or ten.
Back then, I didn't know about love
And now, I can't find any decent men.
I felt a spark, a warm and fuzzy feeling
From deep inside my heart.
Now, I think I know what it meant
And I miss you more with each day that we're apart.
Maybe, just maybe, you felt it too.
I hope you still remember me, just as I remember you.
Do you have a woman now?
If so, does she treat you right?
Do you secretly wish I that I was there instead?
These are the questions I ask myself at night.
When you moved away from here
I was devastated, and I almost felt like crying.
We'd only known each other for a year, and yet
Now, when I think of you, I find myself sighing.
Your eyes, your smile, your adorable voice...
I would have you again, if given the choice.
You must've been my sanctuary;
You kept me safe from harm
And comforted me whenever you could
And I guess that seeing you leave caused quite an alarm.
I think I may have really loved you
But fate had wanted to see you off.
When I think about your image in my mind these days
I see your face glowing in a light so soft.
Tyler, where are you under this sky?
Nowadays, I find it difficult to keep my spirits high...