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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 21:02:48 GMT -5
It was a rainy day in cathrin, the streets were empty except that one guy who sells fruit. The only think open was the local tavern which was too empty except for one man, Jason Cromwell. His trail had con cold and he needed to refresh himself.
“Excuse me bartender another round of Zima please” said young Jason.
The bartender went to the back room to search for his drink.
OOC: hey its my first time
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 21:13:20 GMT -5
OOC: It could have been better, much better, but it will do.
Wet and weary of his travels Onslow slowly walked in to the small town of Cathrin. Looking for a way to escape from his troubles Onslow searched for the nearest tavern. Kicking down the door to the first building that appeared to sell Ale, Onslow walked in finding only himself and creepy looking man wielding what appeared to be some type of guitar. Sitting next to the stranger Onslow boisterously shouted to the bartender, "Round of your strongest stuff please!"
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 21:16:51 GMT -5
OOC: i ran out of idea like an hour ago
BIC: "ummm sry sir but that man over there took the last of it, as you can see we have financial problems du to to many fight due to the strong stuff." said the bartender with his wailing voice.
jason now started to head out the now broken door.
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 21:23:17 GMT -5
Without bothering to turn around, Onslow shouted at the strange man, "Why the heck, did you take the last of what I wanted. No one out drinks ONSLOW!" Picking up the bartender by the scuff of his shirt, Onslow quickly turned around and tossed the struggling bartender towards the door.
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 21:32:17 GMT -5
" uh uh I-I-I dont want ann-ny trouble"_said the bartender nearly wetting himself.
seeing a grown man having a tantrum over a drink made jason angry. He rushed to aid the fallen bartender
OOC: is armondo going on
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Post by ch00beh on Feb 3, 2007 21:33:51 GMT -5
"Evenin' Death," Rie said nonchalantly as she sauntered into the bar. She picked up the robed skeleton and patted the dust off his back. "Empty, yet still manages to have violence, eh?"
YES, YOU HUMANS ARE QUITE INTERESTING. SCUMBLE AS USUAL?
"Of course," Rie said. She settled down on the nearest bar stool and watched the beginning of what could be an amusing fight. Death made his way back behind the counter.
To normal humans and to anyone just not caring enough, he appeared as some sort of mild mannered bartender, since that's what he wanted to appear as. No one could properly stare at him either. Since he was technically an abstract concept, people had a hard time describing how he looked or how he felt, simply because he was technically not tangible.
However, to people with more exceptional abilities, or those who just knew what was going on, he appeared as their version of death. Rie worked as a bounty hunter, and thus spent enough time in bars, to know that Death liked to work as a bartender when he wasn't collecting souls.
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 21:34:48 GMT -5
OOC: He said he would. Also, redo that last post or something. Did you not read what I wrote or something? You were at the door and I threw the bartender in that direction. The bartender is now flying at you, so you cant stop him by putting your hand on my shoulder.
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 21:36:29 GMT -5
OOC: sry ill change it kk read ch00beh's post
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 21:41:10 GMT -5
"Ay! PAY ATTENTION TO ME WHEN I TALK TO YOU!!11! I said no one out drinks me!"
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 21:43:39 GMT -5
OOC: let’s do a re-wind
Jason had seen everything demons, zombies and now a man throwing another man over a drink. Now throwing the bartender of himself he lowered his goggles to show his horns and the small rift in his forehead. He began the opening sequence with a smirk on his face.
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 21:51:09 GMT -5
"Oh! Ye want a fight aye?! Well fightin' is what I do best!"
Onslow throws off his cloak and brandishs his battle axes.
"Come and get some ya panzy!"
Onslow quickly looks down at his prized medalion and prays to himself, "Charles, give me strength. Let me make you proud."
Getting into a battle ready postition, Onslow prepares for the upcoming fight.
"This'll be fun"
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 21:56:17 GMT -5
"Samba" sprouts out of Jason’s head and a loud scream is heard across the town.
He then flash steps behind the counter then behind Onslow brandishing the daemon stance and whispers in his ear" lets dance!!!”
OOC: cue fight music please
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 21:59:34 GMT -5
"Heh, this is going to be fun." Onslow rears his head in a sharp backwards motion attempting to headbutt Jason in the face.
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 22:02:45 GMT -5
he was smashed back and hit the wall shattering the classic picture of an ocean from to pieces. he then jumped forward at attempted to his onlsow with samba. OOC: www.youtube.com/watch?v=PTN7Qw0obsI
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 22:10:20 GMT -5
"Heh not so fast!" Onslow takes a deep breath and appears to almost double in size. Curling his lips in an O fashion, Onslow turns his head toward the oncoming enemy. Water began to jet out of Onslows mouth directly at his opponent. After firing the sudden shot Onslow jumps backward and begins to hover in mid air.
"Heh, I thought you would put up more of a fight. I wont be needing these." Reattaching his axes to his belt Onslow looks up to see what effect the water had on his enemy.
Rummaging through his cloak, Onslow removes a few metal darts "I'm going to practice with these instead. Heh Heh!"
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 22:14:30 GMT -5
now Jason was super pissed , he hasn't done this move in while . he began to concentrate and the rift on his forehead grew a began to suck up the water and most un bolted things in the bar " welcome to you own little dimension"
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 22:24:09 GMT -5
Seeing that all small and relatively weightless things were now being pulled into the general direction of Jason, Onslow thought to himself, "Well this is really convenient for me." Removing all the darts held in his cloak, and bunching them together, in order to produce one large scatter throw.
Throwing something of fifty darts in the general direction of Jason at full force, Onslow shouted, "Take this! Heh, no way you can survive this!"
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 22:27:03 GMT -5
" ha" said jason to himself," fallen right in my trap", the rift now reversed its self and shot the darts right back at him.
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 22:34:27 GMT -5
"Heh, thats a clever trick," sighed Onslow as he saw his own projectiles being shot right back at him, "however, not good enough." Again Onslow took in a large breath, appearing to double in size. This time a large shield like spray came out of Onslows mouth, just powerful enough to stop the darts, but dispersed enough to cover almost all the area around Onslow.
"Well I really don't think your worthy of it, but I guess I will have to use these." Taking his two axes from his cloak once again.
Now rushing toward Jason, axes back in a ninja style fashion, Onslow shouts "Lets see some real fight out of you this time!"
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 22:39:32 GMT -5
jason sensing the power of this odd individual shot straight up into the roof . and began to open the rift one more time before "things" start happening. out came the last part of his puzzle. the flying V and the gibson were now held in his hands wailing for pain. " you havent seen all my card yet ,its showtime !!!"
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Post by kazkame on Feb 3, 2007 22:41:44 GMT -5
OOC: im going to sleep now oh and your icon is wrong it should be this
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 3, 2007 22:43:31 GMT -5
"Ha! And you think you have seen all of mine! You dont deserve to see a full hand!" Rumble began to fall as Onslow shot up through the roof. Hovering fifty feet above the ground Onslow waited patently to see what Jason's "new cards" had in store.
"Bring it on you panzy! Lets see some fight from you!"
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Post by Damien on Feb 4, 2007 10:38:03 GMT -5
OOC: Lol some good stuff, a couple of things however: Remember and spell check what you've written before posting it makes things a whole lot easier to read. Also, remember that when RPing posts are written in the past tense at all times.
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 4, 2007 12:44:20 GMT -5
OOC: What do you mean, Diseases are in the past tense. Could you elaborate on that?
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Post by ch00beh on Feb 4, 2007 13:16:54 GMT -5
OOC: feck, diseases is a word replacement. I think the word was supposed to be P O S T S, but I'm not entirely certain. Lee?
What he's saying is that when you write, keep it in the past tense. I'm actually not too worried either way about what tense you're in. I mean Wudge, one of the best RPers we've had, even used future tense to set up counter moves.
But it is kinda easier to read a story if it's in the past tense. I dunno. Do what you want in that regard.
More importantly though: reread p o s t s before submitting them to spellcheck and grammar check. In fact, firefox 2 has this nifty little built in spell checker. Sure, it'll think fantasy names are wrongly spelled, but at least it'll catch the little errors.
also, double posts are considered bad form, especially when the posts are only one sentence long. Looks like spamming and stuff. Double posting is only bad, though, if the posts are made within a day of each other or some arbitrary time length like that
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Post by Popebenedict on Feb 4, 2007 13:19:25 GMT -5
OOC: I always spell check my stuff...
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